Hey! I enjoyed the game (the typos are understandable haha). I didn't expect it to be this touching before I played it. I appreciate it that the BGMs are all piano music, and the 'slight romance' is really interesting too. Tee-hee xD Looking forward to your future projects! :)
It was a good game. I like the plot, it was sweet and I also like the art. The music is very nice, although there is some mistake spellings, it was still good
I really enjoyed this! It was a sweet little story with cute characters. Very emotional too. The art and music were very nice. :D
The grammar and spelling mistakes didn't stop me from reading it and they weren't too bad. But I do feel that this great story could become even better if the script was put through an app like Grammarly (which is free) to help catch these mistakes. And maybe have it proofread by someone as well. It's not totally necessary though as it is still enjoyable.
A job well done on your first visual novel! I hope you make more in the future. <3
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Hi :)
Beautiful visual novel about passion and love :)
and of course beautiful music too :)
Hi ! Thank you so much !
Hey! I enjoyed the game (the typos are understandable haha). I didn't expect it to be this touching before I played it. I appreciate it that the BGMs are all piano music, and the 'slight romance' is really interesting too. Tee-hee xD Looking forward to your future projects! :)
Thank you so much ! :D
It was a good game. I like the plot, it was sweet and I also like the art. The music is very nice, although there is some mistake spellings, it was still good
Thank you !
I really enjoyed this! It was a sweet little story with cute characters. Very emotional too. The art and music were very nice. :D
The grammar and spelling mistakes didn't stop me from reading it and they weren't too bad. But I do feel that this great story could become even better if the script was put through an app like Grammarly (which is free) to help catch these mistakes. And maybe have it proofread by someone as well. It's not totally necessary though as it is still enjoyable.
A job well done on your first visual novel! I hope you make more in the future. <3
Thank you so much !! It means a lot for me <3
I will try to rewritte the script with the help of Grammarly.
I will improve my writing for my future visual novels!
No worries! <3
I'm glad you're okay with me giving some advice. If you do rewrite it I will be sure to read it again. :D
I'm sure you will improve! You're a really good storyteller and I look forward to your future visual novels. :)
I always open to good advice :D
And thank you again !